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write a narrative through the eyes of the snowman or lily. Use adjectives, adverb and other interesting language features to describe the setting. The snowman's or lily's feelings and thoughts and what is happening.
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This week we had to write an awesome piece of writing by watching a video. I hope you like my story about Lily and the snowman and have a great day 😎.
Lily and the Snowman
One silent bright freezing peaceful icy night. I was in New York. The moon light sparkled like blue diamonds. The stars twinkled near the shiny black twinkly sky. I was building a snowman. I sicked the glowing ball on the top for the snowman’s head. I plonked some stones for the snowman’s eyes and mouth. I plopped a carrot for the snowman’s nose.
Bright yellow light flashed from the kitchen. Suddently the snowman came to life. I was amazed and happy to find a new friend. The snowman made a puppet show with the flashing bright light
The first one was about a bold harpy eagle. The eagle was travelling to the coral canyons which was red as blood. The bold harpy eagle kept traveling until he reached to the red fluided canyon. The second puppet was about the legend athletic cliff cavort. He came with his powerful horse. He springed with his powerful horse to the other side. Although he jumped through the most dangerous anchent cliff.
A water drop droped on me as I looked behind me. I saw my snowman melting into water. I thinked as fast as I could. I ran as fast as I could to the garage. I took my old toy truck. I placed the snowman in my truck. I ran to the refrigerator. I gave snowman my teddy and see you next winter
When I was 9 I checked if the snowman was still in refrigerator. I opended the door of the refrigerator. We went outside and had another puppet show. I kept on growing older and older. I looked if the snowman was there. He had lots and lots of puppet shows. I was enjoying my time watching the puppet shows.
years and years passed. When I was an adult I went to work. Suddenly my coffee spilled. Afterwards I got a fright. My globe made a sign that I forgot snowman. My flash light jumped down broken although the lights were OK. My globe showed me a shadow of snowman. That was when I remembered snowman.
I took my keys and my jacket. I went home with my car. I went to check if snowman was still alive. When I looked inside the refrigerator. Snowman was still alive. I gave a big smile to snowman. Later I plonked him in the snow. I had a daughter called Emma. we were happy to see more puppet shows.
The End
