Here is an example of my writing. Can you imagine the scene in your head?
My strong muscles slithered across the mossy jungle. I smelled the rotten leaves and the stinky moss as I was hunting. I wound my way between the close grouped trees, dodging past the low hanging vines. I heard birds chirping I knew that my prey was close. A strong smell covered my nose. It was the blood of a human being. I quickly slithered toward the human being. The smell got stronger and stronger.
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