Poetrys

POETRY"S PRESENTATION

W.A.L.T

Create a description of the scene using similes and metaphors. Write in correct sentences. Use paragraphs correctly. Use adjectives, Begin sentences with different/ interesting languages.

This week we have been writing  about poetry s. We imagine about animals  and had to write an awesome piece of writing😎👍.

SELFIE CAT

SELFIE CAT PRESENTATION

W.A.L.T

Create a description of the scene using similes and metaphors. Write in correct sentences. Use paragraphs correctly. Use adjectives, Begin sentences with different/ interesting languages.

This week we have been writing  about Selfie Cat. We watched a video and had to write an awesome piece of writing😎👍.

PIGEON IMPOSSIBLE!!!!

Pigeon Impossible

Hi my name is Walter Becket . I am 32 and I am a junior agent. I live in Washington D.C in united states. I work for the seal agents in united states of america. I use a black and white magnetic suit. Because it tells people that I am an agent.

In Washington D.C I was crossing the  traffic lights. when I was crossing. the lights turned green. There was a cars which was white with flames. The car driver told me to hurry up. Then a dodge came along and he told me to hurry up. The same thing as the other car's driver said to me.

When I was eating my donut I opened my computer. The computer was fashionable. After a while the pigeon started fighting me. I threw the whole piece at the ground. The pigeon ran after the Donut.

Kabam suddenly the pigeon got trapped inside my brief case. Afterwards the pigeon started pushing buttons. The pigeon pushed the jumping button. After a while he jumped again and again. A lady was screaming and she ran away.

The pigeon clicked the button of laser gun’s. He pressed more and more of the buttons. I hid near the telephone centre. I looked if every thing was OK. The Lazer gun almost hit my eye but i dodged it.

The pigeon clicked another button and clicked it once. My brief case transformed 2 jets. Then the brief case flew with the pigeon wobbling  inside.

He fired more lasers. After then  people began running. He braked he saw me with my donut. I saw a burning car I was about to put the donut in the fire.

The pigeon turned off the the jets and landed on the ground. He opened the brief case. I went closer and closer. When I was near I went to catch the pigeon. He went back in the case a small rocket shot up. I Threw the donut in the air.  Then I pushed the pigeon away. The donut hit the rocket launching button. The rocket flew up I looked in my computer It said the rocket will land in Morocco in Russia.

The briefcase turned on his wings and flew very fast. The pigeon followed me. The pigeon was on top of the briefcase.  I click the grey opener and the donut fell down and the pigeon flew happly down to the ground.  I Shot the rocket inside  my briefcase. The humungus  rocket exploded into Quintilian pieces.

I went down to the ground. I looked at the rocket. He walked smartly with his sun glasses. Afterwards the rocket crashed into the pigeon.

The End

THE BIG DIG !!!!!!

This week we rote about The Big dig. we had to read Three books😎

ALL ABOUT ME!!!!!

This week we rote all about our self's. we had to plan and had to write an awesome piece of writing.😎

POWER OF RUBBISH !!!!!

                                           W. A. L. T                                         


We find in information's about the power of rubbish and how rubbish can destroy the world.  We have to research into several sites to find interesting facts. You can copy and paste yet we have to use what we copied and pasted  into in our own words.


This week my group panthers were reading three books about The power of rubbish. how rubbish can damage animals and humans. Then we made a DLO about The power of rubbish. I hope you like my reading DLO about the power of rubbish. I grant you a great week.😎

Sea Lions DLO

We find information about sea lions and why sea lions are endangered. We have to research into several sites to find interesting facts. You can copy and paste yet you have to look at another site if the information is the same. Afterwards we have to use what we copied and pasted  into our own words.


This week my group panthers were reading three books about seals and sea lions. We read where sea lions live and what they eat. After we made a Digital Learning Object about sea lions. I hope you like my reading DLO about sea lions. I wish you have a great week.😎

My Weather DLO

                                       W.A .L .T.

 We find information about weathers and how they damage stuff. We have to research into several sites to find interesting facts. You can copy and paste yet you have to look at another site if the information is the same. Afterwards we have to use it in our own words.


This week my group panthers were reading three books about weathers. We read why weather can be dangerous. Then we made a Digital Learning Object about weathers. I hope you like my reading DLO about Weathers. I wish you have a great week.😎

LILY AND THE SNOWMAN !!!!!

W . A . L . T

write a narrative through the eyes of the snowman or lily. Use adjectives, adverb and other interesting language features to describe the setting. The snowman's or lily's feelings and thoughts and what is happening.

destription

This week we had to write an awesome piece of writing by watching a video. I hope you like my story about Lily and the snowman and have a great day 😎.

Lily and the Snowman

One silent bright freezing peaceful icy night. I was in New York. The moon light sparkled like blue diamonds. The stars twinkled near the shiny black twinkly sky. I was building a snowman. I sicked the glowing  ball on the top for the snowman’s head. I plonked some stones for the snowman’s eyes and mouth. I plopped a carrot for the snowman’s nose.

Bright yellow light flashed from the kitchen. Suddently the snowman came to life. I was amazed  and happy to find a new friend. The  snowman made a puppet show with the flashing bright light

The first one was about a bold harpy eagle. The eagle was travelling to the coral canyons which was red as blood. The bold harpy eagle kept traveling until he reached to the red fluided canyon. The second puppet was about the legend athletic cliff cavort. He came with his powerful horse. He springed with his powerful horse to the other side. Although he jumped through the most dangerous anchent cliff.

A water drop droped on me as I looked behind me. I saw my snowman melting into water. I thinked as fast as I could. I ran as fast as I could to the garage. I took my old toy truck. I placed the snowman in my truck. I ran to the refrigerator. I gave snowman my teddy and see you next winter

When I was 9 I checked  if the snowman was still in refrigerator. I opended the door of the refrigerator. We went outside and had another puppet show.  I kept on growing older and older. I looked if the snowman was there. He had lots and lots of puppet shows. I was enjoying my time watching the puppet shows.

                   

years and years passed. When I was an adult I went to work. Suddenly my coffee spilled. Afterwards I got a fright. My globe made a sign that I forgot snowman. My flash light jumped down broken although the lights were OK.  My globe showed me a shadow of snowman.  That was when I remembered snowman.

I took my keys and my jacket. I went home with my car. I  went to check if  snowman was still alive. When I looked inside the refrigerator. Snowman was still alive. I gave a big smile to snowman. Later I plonked him in the snow. I had a daughter called Emma. we were happy to see more puppet shows.

The End

PERSISTENT PIGEONS

PERSISTENT PIGEONS

The sun shone like gold the sky was as blue as fresh pure water. It was a sunny bright and gold morning. In a nest near by there were cute baby pigeons. The pigeon’s names were Charlie, Angel and Sunshine. There was a boom cracking bell that rang loud each day.

Suddenly they felt their eyes angrily. They had a competition of who can get the first worm. They started screaming to their mum for some worms. After 1 hour Charlie, Angel and Sunshine got tired. After a few more minutes they stopped screaming.

Suddenly Sunshine saw a muffin that was creamy as ice cream. He told his brother and sister that he saw a creamy muffin that looked demolishious. Sunshine pointed to

the creamy muffin to Charlie. After Charlie saw the creamy muffin he said yum yum.

Suddenly Sunshine jumped out of the nest. Charlie followed him because they were starving. Angel followed Charlie and sunshine. There was one problem Angel didn’t know how to jump from the nest.  she jumped yet she was alright.

Sunshine, Charlie and Angel went to catch the creamy and demolishious muffin. They tried to fly yet it didn't work. Suddenly sunshine figured a plan. Sunshine told Angel to be at the bottom and Charlie was in the middle and Sunshine was at the top. He tried to reach but the creamy and demolishous muffin yet the muffin was too high for the three pigeons.

Angel had another idea,  it was using a leaver. Angel went to the other side though she was very worried. Charlie jumped on the other side yet it didn’t work so Sunshine jumped with him. Suddenly Angel flew up in the air like a bird hanging up the sky. She hit the side of the window and came back and landed with his brother and sister.

They went back to their nest they quit for the cupcake. While they waited for their mother. A bell rang as they saw a shadow.  It passed through their mind. They noticed that it was their mother. Their mother had 1 long piece of worm for them to share. Their heads were down as they were starving with hunger.

THE END

PAPER PLANE DISCOVERY !!!!

This is my slideshow of my discovery about paper plane.

Ormie the Pig

This is my story of Ormie the pig. We watched a video and we wrote a story. We planned first before we started. Hope you enjoy and have a great holiday😎😁.

One glooming morning there was a pig called Ormie. The sun shone as bright as gold. The sky looked bright like silver. He was in a clean city that sparkled called New Delhi.

He was guarding the house as he looked and sniffed. He smelled some cookies as his breath flew up the fridge. He was excited to taste cookies. As he sniffed the cookies he jumped down for joy. He used two of his feet and ran on the same spot ang bang bang.

He tried to catch the cookie jar. He was too short to reach up. So he took his grandmother’s broom. He took and touched the cookie jar with the broom but the cookie jar got further away. He thought to sweep the floor nice and tidy to make his grandma appreciate his work.

Then he took a stool and jumped to reach the cookies. Suddenly he opened the freezer. Few moments later ice flooded through him. He took a cup and two ice cubes came and jumped into the glass.

After he put 4 books in front of the fridge. he went to get to get the iron board. He came back with an iron board. After a while Ormie went and got a bowling ball. He threw the bowling ball to the other side he was too fat that he got hurt.

At last he went sky gliding. He jumped off an airplane with his umbrella. He took his umbrella and he flew up. The umbrella broke and Ormie fell down with a big jump to the fridge.

He was mad and he grouled. He leaned hard on the fridge. Suddenly it was raining cookies. He caught one of the cookies. He was joy filled and happy. Suddenly when he was about to eat the cookie. His mouth was stuck because the cookie jar fell on his head.

THE END

FLOATING M&MS !!!!

This is my slideshow about floating M&Ms

Hope you enjoy and have a great weekend 😎

Please comment and have a great holiday.

ADVENTURERS ARE THE PITS!!!!!

This is my writing called Adventures are the pits. Hope you enjoy my writing. Have a great day.😎

Once upon a time, I  went to the ball pits to have an adventure. It was fun place with 100000 balls. I  took a deep breath. I slid down the slide as fast as I could. I never looked I went deeper and deeper. I landed on a pit and  hit my face.

I  saw a lollipop stuck on my face I pulled it off. I looked behind me and saw how deep the ball pit was.

Then I started to climb the balls.  I jumped on the  other side and I slipped on a toy. I tried  my personal best and started to climb the balls.  A bandage came to me in my mouth I almost sneezed but held tight and I tried to blow it away.

Suddenly I tried to get the bandage off me with my hands and I held in a lolly. After a few  minutes  I climbed with the lollypop all the way to the top. I looked at the lollypop off and ate it.

THE END

THE CLOUD!!!!!

Once there was a cloud that was brave and smart. He was sent by another adult cloud that was curious.  I was traveling to a city called New York, and was serving other people. I was passing a man that was Lonely. The humans were amazed and were happy.

I looked at myself in a mirror. I knew that I was so special to everyone. I was strong  and kind  to others.

I helped people with the traffic lights. I became  famous and  furious.  I was surprised

I went into a shed. I lit up the   shed so I could see. A dog barked at me I was terrified.

A woman saw me when she was working. I passed through and looked at the woman that was working hard.

She looked at me back and had a smile on her face.

There was a fire and the firetrucks and firefighters came and poured the water. I came to help the firefighters used  my strength and never gave up.  

I went back home  had some rest.  I had a long journey and had a busy day.

The End

TOM TRUEHEART!!!!!

This week we have been writing about Tom TrueHeart, Tom TrueHeart is a boy that is a size of a thumb. We watched a video of it and write that how to save his six brothers and their princess brides. I wrote a story about it and I whould like to share it with you. I hope you like it and leave a comment. I hope you have a great day 😎.

Tom TrueHeart

Once upon a time my name was a man called tom truehart. I  did not like being a size of a thumb.  I had to rescue my 6 handsome brothers  and princess brides in a abandoned city .

I had a special sword It was shining like the blue ocean.

There was a wizard that will help me find my 6 handsome brothers and princes brides because we were friends. We looked in an abandoned castle  and the forest.

Princess bride was stuck up in an abandoned castle. A dragon gaurding her. I killed the dragon with my magical sword and saved princess brides.

I was Quiet My 6 brothers were stuck up in the abandoned Anci`ent factory and there was a witch gaurding my brothers.  My wizard friend  helped me pause the witch.  I went into ancient factory and  found my brothers The wizard did a spell and we were all back home.

THE END

MY MATHS DLO!!!!!!

 Hope you enjoy this video and write a comment below.

This is one of my maths strategy. You have to solve maths in a diffrent way. This is how I did it please watch this Video to know how I solved this strategy.

MY LEARNING GOALS 2017!!!!!

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This is my Learning Goals. I shared  my  work with Dad in the Meeting. In Reading  I want to prove in stage 10.
In writing I want to Improve in My hard writing.
In maths I want to prove in stage 7 part 2.

I felt really proud of myself and fealt much better.

RUIN!!!!!

this is my master peace of ruin. we watched a video clip. we wrote a story of the video clip. I tried my best. Hope you like it and have a great weekend.😎😄

I was in a country that was abandoned. It looked like a wild country. There was  a huge building that was called Haven Nano system. There was a metal box in Haven Nano system I kicked The metal box down from the 87th floor of that building. I hurried down to see what was in that metal box. I found a phone and saw some information.

After a few moments I heard the sound of something dangerous . Oh! It was  a gyro copter. It thundered towards me. I ran as fast as I could but the gyro copter spotted me. I slid down a wall and found my motor bike. I rode off at high speed and zigzagged rocks, bushes and took a shortcut.

The  gyro copter sent two robot flyers to catch me. I sped  into a tunnel and overtook abandoned cars. Two of the robots continued shooting at me. I used my last fire bolt when I was almost out of the tunnel, I threw it up the top of the tunnel and  the 2 robot flyers blasted.

After the robot flyers blasted. I was still going but the gyrocopter saw me. The gyrocopter shot me. I blasted off and the gyrocopter did not stop shooting! The gyrocopter went faster than the motorbike.  I flew to the cliff  I held my sword tight  and jumped high until I put it inside the gyrocopter three times. It blasted just like the two robot flyers blasted. I looked at the gyrocopter and it was 100% blasted.

                                                                 The End  

RIGHT PLACE AT THE RIGHT TIME!!!!!!!

Last week MR Madren taught us being in the Right place the Right time ready for my New Learning. We did a Digital Learning Object.

I fealt amazed when I saw the online stuff on cybersmart.

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