This is my writing called Adventures are the pits. Hope you enjoy my writing. Have a great day.😎
Once upon a time, I went to the ball pits to have an adventure. It was fun place with 100000 balls. I took a deep breath. I slid down the slide as fast as I could. I never looked I went deeper and deeper. I landed on a pit and hit my face.
I saw a lollipop stuck on my face I pulled it off. I looked behind me and saw how deep the ball pit was.
Then I started to climb the balls. I jumped on the other side and I slipped on a toy. I tried my personal best and started to climb the balls. A bandage came to me in my mouth I almost sneezed but held tight and I tried to blow it away.
Suddenly I tried to get the bandage off me with my hands and I held in a lolly. After a few minutes I climbed with the lollypop all the way to the top. I looked at the lollypop off and ate it.
THE END
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