I am a student at Hornby Primary School. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Friday, 1 December 2017
Poetrys
POETRY"S PRESENTATION
W.A.L.T
Create a description of the scene using similes and metaphors. Write in correct sentences. Use paragraphs correctly. Use adjectives, Begin sentences with different/ interesting languages.
This week we have been writing about poetry s. We imagine about animals and had to write an awesome piece of writing😎👍.
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Hey Joel,
ReplyDeleteI am Jade C from the Summer Learning Journey blogging team 2017-2018. I will be blogging with you this summer! I hope you are having a wonderful time with your friends and your family!
Your presentation is super colourful and interesting! I really like how you included all your poems in a google slide and presented it online. How long did it take you to create this slide? You are an amazing poet and I would love to read more of your writings! It's amazing how we can share our learning and fun ideas together through blogging online.
I would love to blog more with you! To help you get started with blogging this summer, I have included the link to our Summer Learning Journey activities list.
https://sites.google.com/site/summerlearningjourney/weekly-activities
Let's go on the Summer Learning Journey together!
All the best,
Jade C.