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Friday, 17 August 2018

Endless Exposition

WALT write an exposition. Exposition writing is a type of writing to persuade, criticize or review

Here is my first amazing attempt

I think collaborative classrooms are a bad idea. One reason for this is the noise level. Another reason
they are bad because there is too much work for teachers. In a collaborative classroom, it is too messy.


In a collaborative classroom, the noise level is too high. In a collaborative classroom, the noise level is so
high you wouldn't be able to concentrate. it can be like a headache if you’re in collaborative classroom.


In a collaborative classroom, there are so many students. That’s why it is so hard for teachers to check
work. I think it is going to be hard for teachers to check work with lots of students.


In a collaborative classroom, people leave the mess around. They throw mess and don’t pick them up.
They're like small kids leaving rubbish behind when no one is looking.

I think collaborative classrooms are a really bad choice because of the noise level, because it’s hard for
teachers to check work, and because people leave lots of mess around.

The first step I had to do was make a google doc
Next I inserted a table and gave it a title
After that I wrote the words positive, negative and interesting to the table
Next I wrote some information on the tables and highlighted 3 reasons why
After I highlighted 3 reasons I made an Opening paragraph with my opinion
Next I wrote about the 3 reasons in different paragraphs

At the end I did my conclusion which had my opinion and my 3 reasons

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Thank you for looking at my blog post hope you enjoy!!!!!

3 comments:

  1. Hello Joel,
    I really like your post it has good ideas. I think you are right about it being a big mess. One thing I was not sure about was when you said "It can be like a headache if you’re in combined classroom." did you mean you can get a headache? but other than that I think you are really good at writing. Well have a nice day bye.
    -Jasper.

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    1. Thank you Jasper and I did mean that you can get a headache. It was really nice of you to proofread my writing. Also thank you for checking my grammar, bye.

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  2. Hello Joel,i am Briana. I liked your writing about your exposition. think you need to work on your writing and make it more interesting.
    Keep It up

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