Here is my first amazing attempt
I think collaborative classrooms are a bad idea. One reason for this is the noise level. Another reason
they are bad because there is too much work for teachers. In a collaborative classroom, it is too messy.
they are bad because there is too much work for teachers. In a collaborative classroom, it is too messy.
In a collaborative classroom, the noise level is too high. In a collaborative classroom, the noise level is so
high you wouldn't be able to concentrate. it can be like a headache if you’re in collaborative classroom.
high you wouldn't be able to concentrate. it can be like a headache if you’re in collaborative classroom.
In a collaborative classroom, there are so many students. That’s why it is so hard for teachers to check
work. I think it is going to be hard for teachers to check work with lots of students.
work. I think it is going to be hard for teachers to check work with lots of students.
In a collaborative classroom, people leave the mess around. They throw mess and don’t pick them up.
They're like small kids leaving rubbish behind when no one is looking.
They're like small kids leaving rubbish behind when no one is looking.
I think collaborative classrooms are a really bad choice because of the noise level, because it’s hard for
teachers to check work, and because people leave lots of mess around.
teachers to check work, and because people leave lots of mess around.
The first step I had to do was make a google doc
Next I inserted a table and gave it a title
After that I wrote the words positive, negative and interesting to the table
Next I wrote some information on the tables and highlighted 3 reasons why
After I highlighted 3 reasons I made an Opening paragraph with my opinion
Next I wrote about the 3 reasons in different paragraphs
At the end I did my conclusion which had my opinion and my 3 reasons
Thank you for looking at my blog post hope you enjoy!!!!!
Hello Joel,
ReplyDeleteI really like your post it has good ideas. I think you are right about it being a big mess. One thing I was not sure about was when you said "It can be like a headache if you’re in combined classroom." did you mean you can get a headache? but other than that I think you are really good at writing. Well have a nice day bye.
-Jasper.
Thank you Jasper and I did mean that you can get a headache. It was really nice of you to proofread my writing. Also thank you for checking my grammar, bye.
DeleteHello Joel,i am Briana. I liked your writing about your exposition. think you need to work on your writing and make it more interesting.
ReplyDeleteKeep It up